中考英语写作指导：作文为什么被扣分

四档文：内容不完整，语言表述错误很多，不能完整地表达思想。可得0-5分三档文：内容完整，重点描述合理，但表述不充分，层次结构不合理，语言不够流畅，字迹不够工整，7-9 处语法或拼写错误;字数不足。可得8-10分二档文：内容完整，重点描述比较充分，层次结构比较清晰，语言比较流畅，字迹工整，有3-4处语法或拼写错误;字数符合要求。可得11-13分一档文：内容完整，重点描述清楚、合理，表达充分，层次结构清晰，字迹工整，可读性强，语言流畅，仅有1-2处语法或拼写错误;字数符合要求。可得14-15分

初中英语作文写作技巧，马上中考了。我一点词汇量也没有。

平常考试什么样的写作类型比较多，可以背个1 2篇典型的，考试的时候用上，然后改几句或者添加几句你会写的，这是捷径。

写作还是要多练，建议你每天写1-2篇。写完后有易改英语写作软件检查下。百度下易改，可以看到官网，免费的。

中考英语指导的高手来看一下~~~~~~急急急急急急急。。。。。。。。

书信是中考最喜欢考的，所以这个一定要掌握 其次是日记和看图写话，主要靠临场发挥和想象力作文1假如你是吴鹏,你的表弟陈晨正在读初中一年级,他写信告诉你英语学的不好,所以没兴趣继续学,现在请你给他写一封信说明以下要点: A:来信已经收到,很关注他英语学习的情况B:英语是一门非常重要也非常有用的课程.世界上许多国家都使用英语.C:互联网上绝大多数信息都使用英语.D:要有信心学好英语,平时应多读,多练,遇到问题应多向同学和老师请教.D:希望能有进步.I’ve received your letter, from your letter I know that you didn’t do well in your English and you aren’t interested in it. I’m worried about your English, because English is a very important and useful language. English is spoken by people in many countries .And a lot of information on the Internet is written in English. So if you want to learn it well, you should work hard on it .You can read more and practise more every day. If you have any questions, you can ask your classmates or your teachers for help. Keep working hard ,you will make it.The dolphin has been on earth for a long time .They live in the ocean and are strong enough to attack a shark and kill it .Dolphins work together to hit the shark with their strong noses . They swim very fast at the shark from all different directions and then hit with their noses . However they will never attack a shark unless they are trying to protect themselves or their babies . The deer is thought to be a helpless animal. However , this isn’t true . The male deer or buck will fight a bloody fight with another buck to protect its own area . The problem is that because of pollution and loss of land in many places the deer population is decreasing . We must make sure the deer’s place on earth is protected .To do this we need to educate society about how to clean up and protect the environment.通知 请以班长的身份， 用英语口头通知全班同学， 告诉大家下周一上午由王老师上公开课， 全体英语老师也来听，要求大家做到以下几点：打扫教室，保持整洁。做好课前准备， 不要迟到。对老师要有礼貌。课堂上认真听讲。 举手发言，多用英语回答老师的问题，多用英语与同学相互交流。 注意；字数为70个词左右。Attention ,please ,I’ve got something to you . An open English class will be held in our class next Monday morning . It’ll be given by Miss Li . All the English teachers will be here for it . We should try to do the following well:Clean our classroom carefully and keep it tidy , please .Get everything ready before class and don’t be late .Be polite to all the teachers .Listen to the teacher carefully in class .Put up your hands before you want to speak . And talk with each other in English as much as you can .That’s all . Thank you . HZZ Unit 3 I’m sorry to trouble you . I often see some students step on the grass , throw fruit skins about , drew on the public places , pick flowers in the school garden . I think these facts are unfit for a good school . They all do harm to our school environment . If we don’t stop them at once . Our school environment will get worse and worse . School is also our home . We must keep it clean and tidy . So I want to tell everyone to protect our environment . Do you agree ? HZZ Unit 4 On May Day , Li Ming with his parents went to Huang Shan for travel . They took a bus there . They climbed the mountain first . When they got to the top of it , they had a picnic there . After that they took many pictures on it . The scenery on the mountain was very beautiful .The sea of clouds could be seen all around them . Though the trip was a little dangerous , it was a lot of fun . Dear Ace Travel, I’m Li Ming, from the east of China. For the coming winter vacation, my family and I want to spend our vacation in a foreign city for ten days. We would like to go somewhere not only warm but also interesting. We don’t mind how far we have to go. It has to be a place where we can swim everyday, and it would be nice if our hotel is not expensive but clean and comfortable. We like to pay no more than $ 5,000 for the trip. Could you please give us your suggestions for vacation spots? Thanks a lot. Yours, Li Ming 请你根据来信，从下列所给的地方中选择一个或两个符合Li Ming要求的地方，向他提出建议。（80字左右） Tokyo, Sydney, Hawaii, Shanghai Dear Li Ming, I’m Gina. It’s my pleasure to give you some suggestions for your vacation spots. According to your letter, I think either Sydney or Hawaii is the best choice because they are both warm and interesting. There are some inexpensive hotels, which are clean and comfortable in both places. What’s more, you can enjoy sunshine, walk on the beach and swim every day. Besides, there are many good museums in Sydney. （It’s also a wonderful place for shopping. ）And if you go to Hawaii, you could have a visit to Pearl Harbor, which is quite educational and historical. （And you can also enjoy exotic dances. ） That’s just my idea. I hope it would give you some help. Yours, GinaMike 是你们班的一位来自澳大利亚的同学。他患了感冒，去药店买来一盒药，向你询问服药的方法，请你根据药品的说明书，向Mike解释，并告诉他如何预防感冒。适用于感冒引起的咳嗽，头疼等症状。反前服用，一次1—2片，一天三次，疗程3—5天。偶有瞌睡感，服药期间忌鱼、酒、辛辣食物。This medicine is used for cough, headache and something like that caused by cold. Take one or two pills each time, and three times a day before meals. Sometimes you may feel like sleeping after you take it .It doesn’t matter. Don’t have fish, wine, or hot food these days while you’re taking this medicine .And you’ll be fine in three or five days. By the way, I think you’d better take good care of yourself and keep healthy. For example, put on more clothes when you go outside on a cold day, have more water, fruit and vegetables. And the most important of all , do more sports every day to be stronger. I wish you’ll be all right soon.不同的学生有不同的学习方法。你认为要学好外语，学习应该刻苦。早上起床后要练习朗读和口语，课堂上要积极发言，放学后要按时完成听、说、读、写等作业。总之，勤奋是最好的方法。不努力是不成功的。谈谈你如何学好外语发表你的看法。Different students have different learning ways. To learn a foreign language well, I think, a student should work hard at it. He should spend a lot of time reading or practising English after he gets up in the morning. He should be active in class. He should finish his homework in listening, speaking, reading and writing after school. In a word, hard work is the best way of all. No one would be successful in a language study without hard work.某校决定学生轮流打扫厕所，以次作为教育学生的一种方式。这件事在学生中引起了强烈的反响。请你把下下列不同意见整理成一篇书面材料，报告给学校。同意 不同意多数学生是独身子女，不会做事。学会做艰苦的工作。学会理解和尊重清洁工人的劳动 。 很脏，容易使学生生病。不是学生应该做的事情。打扫教师就够了。Some students say many of us are the only child in our family .We are not able to do hard work .To clean the toilet is good to teach us how to do difficult jobs .By cleaning toilets, we’ll learn to understand and respect the cleaning workers . On the other hand, some students think toilets are dirty. It’s easy for us to get sick. They don’t think it’s the students’ job. We have more important things to do. Cleaning the classroom is enough. We hope the school will think about the problem.VI 书面表达。（20分）假定你是李华，在因特网上看到第九届宁波国际服装节（the 9th Ningbo International Fashion Fair）组委会招聘2005“宁波国际服装节“自愿者（volunteer）的广告。请你用英语写一封简短的邮件，介绍自己的情况（见下表）。表示愿意为服装节做一些工作，请组委会考虑并尽早予以答复。name Li Hua sex malebirthday May, 1991school No. 14 middle school of Ningbohobbit spoken English , computer, traveling telephone number 8785 7896e-mail lihua@163.com注意：1 词数80字左右，要求意思，语句连贯 2 邮件的开头和结尾已经给出（不计人总词数） 3 参考词汇：as soon as possible ,send somebody an e-mailDear Sir/Madam, I read your ad on the Internet yesterday. I’m writing to tell you I’d like work as a volunteer for the 9th Ningbo International Fashion Fair.My name is Li Hua._________________________________________________七、书面表达 （20%）根据下面提供的材料以 A Day’s Visit to Changyu Stone Crave 写一篇80字左右的短文。 Mike是温岭某一学校的外籍教师，国庆节那天他和他的朋友去温岭长屿洞天旅游。他们早上七点乘汽车出发，八点到达。一路上他与同伴谈着、笑着、玩扑克牌，不停地观赏窗外的风景。他们玩得很尽兴，吃了一顿丰富的午餐。他花费1000人民币。这次旅行是短暂的，但是他对这次旅行难以忘怀。 ——————————————————————————————————————七、书面表达 A Day’s Visit to Changyu Stone Crave Mike, a foreign teacher, teaches English in a school in Wenling. He likes traveling. On National Day, he and his friends went on their first trip to Changyu Stone Crave. They went on a bus. They set off at 7:00 and arrived at 8:00. On the bus, they played cards, talking, laughing and kept enjoying the beautiful scenery outside the window. Mike spent ￥1000 on the trip. He had a wonderful time and had a big lunch there.The trip seemed short, but his memory of the pleasant trip will last long！Ⅵ. 书面表达（计25分） 在学习中我经常遇到一些困难，如解不出一些数学、物理难题，记不住英语单词,等等。父母经常生我的气，有时我真地泄气（discouraged）了，但在老师和我的好同学帮助下，我又获得了自信（confidence）.我懂得了只要我努力去学，多投入精力就能学得好。生活也是这样，成功和汗水（sweat）从来都是一对好朋友。 请以 “No Pains, No Gains”(不劳则无或)为题，用英文写一篇短文。词数：80词左右。 Ⅵ.One possible version I am a middle school student. I am a bit poor in my study. I often meet some difficulties, such as I can’t work out some maths and physics problems, and can’t remember English words, and so on. My parents are often anger with me. I am very sorry. I think I am not clever. Sometimes I was discouraged. But my teachers are good to me, and my good friends often encourage me, and help me. They are so kind-hearted that I get the confidence again. I work harder than before. I know that “ No pain, No Gain.”. So does the life. The flowers are full of sweat and hard work.Success and diligence are good friends.一 ． 书面表达（10分）李明的父母都是医护人员，他们因抗击SARS而离家一个月了。中央电视台《真情互动》栏目 准备做一个专访， 录下李明对爸爸妈妈说的话。假定你是李明， 你会对爸爸妈妈说些什么呢？栏目主持人提示：1 诉说情感，表达思念。（proud, miss）2 简述生活，健康有序。（take care of, wash , clean）3 汇报学习，努力进步。（school, hard, progress）4 祝愿父母，如意安康（wish, healthy）要求：（1）语言必须包含以上提示；（2） 词数在80左右 Dear Dad and Mum , Dear Dad and Mum ,How are you getting on? I miss you very much !You are great! I’m proud of you! Dad and Mum , don’t worry about me . I can take care of myself now.(I’ve learned do some housework such as cooking meals, washing my clothes and…) Also I know how to keep healthy. (I often do sport, wash my hands, and open the windows and let clean air in…) Now I’m stronger and healthier . I go to school as usual. I’m working hard at my lessons, and making great progress. Are you glad for me? Don’t forget to look after yourselves. Wish you healthy and happy! X．书面表达(共1小题，满分25分)你是一个中学生，你的英语学得不好，尤其是口语不好，你想请一个外教， 学好口语，实现你的梦想——2008年去北京，为奥运做工作。外教年龄在二十到三十五之间，爱好体育，可以在晚上和周末工作，你家房屋很大，可以供家教老师常住。你的电话是：3023665 请你给自己写一则招聘启事。X. One possible versionWantedI am a middle school students. I am a little weak in English, especially oral English. I like sports very much. The Olympic game will be held in 2008 in Beijing. I am proud of Beijing. I want to make a contribution for the Olympic game.. I want to Beijing to welcome all the friends from all over the world.I want to learn well. Would you like to help me? Are you a foreign teacher? I need an English teacher of 20 to 30. I hope you are fond of sports. Do you work in the evening or on weekends? We have a big house with five rooms. You can live with us if you like. If your answer is OK, please call Olivia at 3023665作文欣赏1： Hello, everyone ! Welcome to our school! Sports are very popular in our school. From 4:30 to 6;00 every after ,students have different kinds of sports, such as football, basketball, volleyball, table tennis, running, swimming, jumping and so on. Most students are good at football and running. We hold a sports meeting every. And also, we often have matches with other middle school. All the students like having sports because it can help us healthy and help us make more friends. Of course, it is also quite good for our study.作文欣赏2： Tomorrow is Youth Day. There will be no classes. The singing contest will be held on the playground between 8:00 to 11:00 in the morning. And there will be a basketball match in the afternoon between the boys’ team and the men teachers’ team from 2:00 to 2:50 , and the volleyball match between the girls’ team and the women teachers’ team at 3:00 on the playground. All the teachers and students are welcome to watch. 作文欣赏3： Ladies and gentlemen:Welcome to our hotel. Our hotel is a very big one. There are 150 rooms. They are nice and clean. There are two restaurants. We serve delicious food for 24 hours. In our hotel, there are beautiful flowers and a big grassland. If you like swimming, there is a big swimming. Our hotel is near the downtown, at 156Xilin Road. There are several big shops and supermarkets around it. You can go shopping easily. If you want to know more, please call us at . Or you can fax us at . I think you will enjoy yourselves in our hotel. We’ll try our best to help you.作文欣赏4： Taking care of our environment is very important. It is well known that man, as well as living things, can’t live without water or air. However, many factories pour waste water directly into the river or lakes and also give out a lot of smoke directly into the air. Someone throws rubbish everywhere. So our environment is getting worse and worse. Polluted water and air is harmful to us. It is our duty to keep our environment clean and tidy. We shouldn’t throw about waste things. We must plant many trees, flowers and grass. If everyone makes a contribution to protecting the environment , the world will become more beautiful.

初三啊……多写点描写吧，写作文不就是写人写物写事嘛。建议在文章中多写点带感情色彩的句子，会使文章丰满。还有好好学习使用连词，不要把文章写散了。