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i do not agreen this opinion,i think the children to grow up in a big city is better than in a countryside.1.good graduation.in a big city,there are many good schools for children to choice.i think a better school is impotant for children to study.2.and in a big city, the children can study quickly,because a big city get new information very fast,it's good for children in the modern time.3.in the big city,it's good for children to have a optimistic character. because in the big city, the parents will send their children to study something such sa danceing,piano,singing...,and these all good for children to know new friends and get some skills that the parents will take their children to attend some match.all these just my opions,thanks!