高考英语作文，希望得到批改

5我是英语专业大三的学生，给你指出几处我认为还需要修改的地方吧
1.recently ,nowadays，有点中式英语，试试看这样说people can enjoy themselves in other diffrent ways like tavelling。In fact,every year we spend much money and money and manpower holding it.多次提到的完全可以用it来替代，最好再查查字典seem的用法，你使用的方法是错误的，扣几分不清楚.a link between the whole country
6，再做分析，扣2~3分吧
3.in the Spring Festival Gala 介词用on ,可以直接用于句首或句尾做时间状语，逗号不用要，但这点在高考中可能不会细作追究，一般不扣分。
2.People who agree with this idea hold……中this指代不明，会扣分，应先说明那个观点,扣0.5~1分
4.people have more ways to enjoy themselves,So there dosen't seem much point ……给我的感觉不很地道.书写认真点young
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求高考英语作文···急··！

 Good morning,ladies and gentlemen.
  Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. I fully undersdand why we are not comfortable about it, but there's no need to fell too sad. . Our parents are checking our  bags or diaries to make sure we're not getting into any trouble. They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong. My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we'd like to trust them.  If you don't think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lying around---they are bound to read it.    Thank you.

09年安徽卷的高考作文