中考英语作文怎样可以得到满分 15分现在一般得 13-14分 具体方法 ! ! !

首先开头要吸引人，而且有技术含量的那种，这样老师就能快速的给你个高分的准备，必须有一手好字…写的整齐…尽量别写错别单词，材料中的要写全，还有写作格式也要注意啦。最后要对自己得满分有信心。

2010年安徽中考英语作文，这是我自己写的，有错误么？

你有些句子用的是直译。其实英语写作中不喜欢直译，意译会比较好。我稍微改了下。有些地方过渡词用的不够。
Dear Sir and Madam,
I am a middle school student,I through the newspaper know that your company will build a factory in my hometown .I'm very happy,because it's good at my hometown's development ,I believe everyone wants their hometomn to become more beautiful,and me too,but I feel worried at the same time,because this will make my hometown become dirty .So I suggest (这里要用建议，语气比较委婉，毕竟你不能要求别人做什么）your company to do following things:First ,don't drain dirty water in the river .Then, don't throw the trash and last planting(这里last是持续，要加动词ing） more trees .
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
You faithfully
Zhang Hua