怎样提高高中英语作文分？

1.字须写好，不苛求有多好看，但必须工整，看起来不歪歪斜斜的。

2.用一些有深度的词，老师会觉得这孩子不错。

3.多用转折词，例：However,But,Moreover

4.多用短语

高中英语作文 高手进

dear Jane,

   you can not worry about your dog,because i will take good care of your dog.you know my favorite pet is dog,so you can belive me.this day i am free,so i have enough time to take good care your dog,

    i tell you i will how to take care your dog ,first i will let dog eat milk and bread in the morning,then in the afternoon i will give rice and meat to eat.and in the evening i will bring the dog to go for a walk when after eatting.finally i will give dog bath befor go to bed.so you can rest assured,do not worry about your dog,

    yours,

    lihua